Re: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)

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From: Mohit Sethi M <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com>
To: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Zahed,

Thanks for reviewing. Answers in-line.

--Mohit

On 10/7/21 3:08 PM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker wrote:
> Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: No Objection
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> Thanks for working on this specification. This is certainly an important
> improvement.
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> I will have to acknowledge the observations form other reviewers about the diff
> style updates in the specifications and the potential consequences of that.
> However, I believe the working group have considered other alternatives and
> made a decision that suits better for the purpose.
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> I also support Francesca's observation about appendix A. It would be good be
> clear about the reference updates.
John has updated Appendix A: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-21#appendix-A,
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> One nit - both Wi-Fi and WiFi are used in this document. I would suggest to
> stick with Wi-Fi.
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Fixed.
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