[Emu] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-04: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 30 May 2020 03:38 UTC

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Subject: [Emu] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-04: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I suspect it would be helpful to expand EAP, EAP-SIM, EAP-AKA, PEAP, and FILS
on first use.

Section 2 feels like it's phrased as an erratum.  I suggest removing the
explicit citation of the existing document and just include the new text.

[Emu] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ie… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker