Re: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Wed, 20 October 2021 18:13 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: Mohit Sethi M <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Emu] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Mohit and Jhon for addressing my comments.

BR
Zahed

On 2021-10-20, 14:37, "Mohit Sethi M" <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com> wrote:

    Hi Zahed,

    Thanks for reviewing. Answers in-line.

    --Mohit

    On 10/7/21 3:08 PM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker wrote:
    > Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
    > draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-20: No Objection
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    > COMMENT:
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    >
    > Thanks for working on this specification. This is certainly an important
    > improvement.
    >
    > I will have to acknowledge the observations form other reviewers about the diff
    > style updates in the specifications and the potential consequences of that.
    > However, I believe the working group have considered other alternatives and
    > made a decision that suits better for the purpose.
    >
    > I also support Francesca's observation about appendix A. It would be good be
    > clear about the reference updates.
    John has updated Appendix A: 
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-21#appendix-A,
    >
    > One nit - both Wi-Fi and WiFi are used in this document. I would suggest to
    > stick with Wi-Fi.
    >
    Fixed.
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