[Emu] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2021-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Well-written document.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: In s5.6 "AAA administrators may need to recognize the name" isn't
clear to me. If this document mentions that administrators may need to
recognize the name, it should specify what actions the administrators need to
take.

Nits/editorial comments: None