[Emu] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-04: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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— Section 2 —

   This section updates [RFC5247] ...
   It further
   defines Session-ID derivation for PEAP.

This section does not address PEAP; that’s done in Section 3.  I suggest
removing that last sentence.

— Section 3 —

   [RFC5247] did not define Session-Id definition for Microsoft's
   Protected EAP (PEAP).  For consistency with EAP-TLS the definition
   given in [RFC5216] Section 2.3, we define it as:

Both sentences here need some fixing:

NEW
   [RFC5247] did not define Session-Id for Microsoft's
   Protected EAP (PEAP).  For consistency with the EAP-TLS definition
   given in [RFC5216] Section 2.3, we define it as:
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