RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07.txt
Andy Bierman <abierman@cisco.com> Wed, 02 February 2005 16:24 UTC
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Date: Wed, 02 Feb 2005 08:06:02 -0800
To: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>
From: Andy Bierman <abierman@cisco.com>
Subject: RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07.txt
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At 07:54 AM 2/2/2005, Wijnen, Bert (Bert) wrote: >Andy writes: >> >> At 07:05 AM 2/2/2005, Wijnen, Bert (Bert) wrote: >> >Can the author/editor and/or the WG react please. >> >I need (if possible) an answer by tomorrow (Thursday) 11am US >> >eastern at the latest (that is, if we want to try and get this >> >approved this week). >> >> what are the edits? CLEI URI to CLEI URN. reference >> RFC 2396 -> RFC 3986. Any other nits? Can't you just carry >> forward an edit list without an update? >> > >I can do that if the WG agrees that that is indeed what we want to do. >I cannot just make such changes without checking back with at least >the authors/editors or the WG. > >> It's not like these updates require anybody to comment. >> Who's going to object to fixing a nit? >> >I can do those fixes with an RFC-Editor note if we agree that >is what we want to do. I am 100% in favor of fixing typos and out-of-date references. I don't think you need to wait for the WG to comment on non-controversial edits. Any WG members out there in favor of keeping typos and out-of-date references, please speak up now! >Bert >> >> >Bert >> >> Andy Andy >> >> >> >> >> -----Original Message----- >> >> From: entmib-bounces@ietf.org >> >> [mailto:entmib-bounces@ietf.org]On Behalf >> >> Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert) >> >> Sent: Tuesday, February 01, 2005 01:05 >> >> To: Entmib-wg (E-mail) >> >> Subject: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07.txt >> >> >> >> >> >> Feedback from IESG >> >> >> >> -----Original Message----- >> >> From: iesg-bounces@ietf.org >> [mailto:iesg-bounces@ietf.org]On Behalf Of >> >> Ted Hardie >> >> Sent: Monday, January 31, 2005 23:28 >> >> To: iesg@ietf.org >> >> Subject: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07.txt >> >> >> >> >> >> Minor, but should be fixed. The document currently says: >> >> >> >> entPhysicalUris OBJECT-TYPE >> >> SYNTAX OCTET STRING >> >> MAX-ACCESS read-write >> >> STATUS current >> >> DESCRIPTION >> >> "This object contains additional identification >> >> information >> >> about the physical entity. The object >> contains URIs and >> >> therefore the syntax of this object must >> conform to RFC >> >> 2396, section 2. >> >> >> >> Multiple URIs may be present and are >> separated by white >> >> space characters. Leading and trailing white space >> >> characters are ignored. >> >> >> >> If no additional identification information >> is known or >> >> supported about the physical entity the object is not >> >> instantiated. A zero length octet string may also be >> >> returned in this case." >> >> REFERENCE >> >> "RFC 2396, Uniform Resource Identifiers (URI): Generic >> >> Syntax, section 2, August 1998." >> >> >> >> This should be updated to the new URI RFC and a pointer to the >> >> appropriate syntax restrictions. This text also does not limit >> >> the types of URIs which may be present. If they are limited, >> >> an enumerated list should be included. >> >> >> >> The document also uses "CLEI URI" to refer to a URN in the CLEI >> >> namespace. That's technically correct, but it would be easier >> >> to understand if CLEI URN was used. Here's an example: >> >> >> >> The entPhysicalUris object may be used to encode for >> >> example a URI >> >> containing a Common Language Equipment Identifier >> (CLEI) URI for >> >> the managed physical entity. The URN name space for CLEIs is >> >> defined in [RFC CLEIURN], and the CLEI format is defined in >> >> [T1.213][T1.213a]. >> >> >> >> Simply swapping out (CLEI) URI for (CLEI) URN would be fine. >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> >> Entmib mailing list >> >> Entmib@ietf.org >> >> https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/entmib >> >> >> _______________________________________________ Entmib mailing list Entmib@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/entmib
- [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07.txt Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Andy Bierman
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Andy Bierman
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Kaj Tesink
- RE: [Entmib] FW: DISCUSS: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-07… Margaret Wasserman