Re: [Entmib] Mini WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-06.txt
Andy Bierman <abierman@cisco.com> Tue, 18 January 2005 18:16 UTC
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Date: Tue, 18 Jan 2005 09:57:10 -0800
To: Margaret Wasserman <margaret@thingmagic.com>
From: Andy Bierman <abierman@cisco.com>
Subject: Re: [Entmib] Mini WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-entmib-v3-06.txt
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At 09:35 AM 1/18/2005, Margaret Wasserman wrote: >[Failed to cc: entmib on this response the first time...] > >Hi Juergen, > >These changes all seem quite concrete and manageable. Perhaps Andy >could make these changes in parallel with sending this MIB to the IESG >later this week. Andy? I'll get -07 done this week. I need to figure out how to make nroff stop ending lines with a split hyphenated word (only ID-nit reported). >Margaret Andy >>On Sun, Jan 16, 2005 at 07:50:17AM -0500, Margaret Wasserman wrote: >> >>> Since this document has already been through WG Last Call several >>> times, I just like to do a quick check that no new problems have been >>> introduced as a result of the latest edits, then I will send this >>> document on to the IESG for publication. >>> >>> So, if you have any objection to this document being submitted to the >>> IESG in its current form for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC, >>> please send them to the entmib@ietf.org mailing list by Wednesday, >>> January 19th. >> >>I support this document being submitted to the IESG. However, I found >>a few nits that probably should be addressed (personally I do not care >>when in the process): >> >>a) The description of entPhysicalMfgDate says '0000000000000000'H is >> returned if the date is unknown. The text in section 2.12.1 says >> that the object is not instantiated if the date is unknown. >> >> It appears to me that entPhysicalFirmwareRev, entPhysicalSoftwareRev, >> entPhysicalSerialNum, entPhysicalMfgName, and entPhysicalModelName >> all return a zero-length string if the value is unknown so I think >> the description is actually consistent with them. >> >> Hence I propose the following change to section 2.12.1: >> >> OLD >> >> This object contains the date of manufacturing of the managed >> entity. If the manufacturing date is unknown or not supported >> the object is not instantiated. >> >> NEW >> >> This object contains the date of manufacturing of the managed >> entity. If the manufacturing date is unknown or not supported >> the object is not instantiated. The special value >> '0000000000000000'H may also be returned in this case. >> >>b) My smilint says the following: >> >> ./ENTITY-MIB:90: warning: type `PhysicalIndex' has no format >> specification >> ./ENTITY-MIB:104: warning: type `PhysicalIndexOrZero' has no format >> specification >> >> I suggest to add DISPLAY-HINT "d" clauses to the TC definitions. >> >>c) If I understand the MIB review guidelines correctly, then we should >> put the following into the IANA Considerations section: >> >> The MIB module in this document uses the following IANA-assigned >> OBJECT IDENTIFIER values recorded in the SMI Numbers registry: >> >> Descriptor OBJECT IDENTIFIER value >> ---------- ----------------------- >> entityMIB { mib-2 47 } >> >> Editor's Note (to be removed prior to publication): this draft >> makes no additional requests of the IANA. >> >> (I know that one can debate the utility of this but I do not want >> to do this here.) >> >>/js >> >>-- >>Juergen Schoenwaelder International University Bremen >><http://www.eecs.iu-bremen.de/> P.O. Box 750 561, 28725 Bremen, Germany > > >_______________________________________________ >Entmib mailing list >Entmib@ietf.org >https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/entmib _______________________________________________ Entmib mailing list Entmib@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/entmib
- Re: [Entmib] Mini WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-entmib… Margaret Wasserman
- Re: [Entmib] Mini WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-entmib… Andy Bierman