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Re: [eppext] draft charter for discussion

Roger D Carney <rcarney@godaddy.com> Wed, 22 July 2015 14:28 UTC

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From: Roger D Carney <rcarney@godaddy.com>
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Subject: Re: [eppext] draft charter for discussion
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Good Afternoon,

I agree with Alex that we could shorten the introduction a bit.

My suggestions would be:

Add something to the second sentence of the first paragraph like "... and ICANN requires all new top level domain registries to implement EPP". We can then eliminate the first two sentences of paragraph three. And we can move the last sentence of paragraph three to the end of paragraph two. This will shorten the introduction and should improve flow.

As Scott and Alex mentioned, I believe there is a missing "is" in the first sentence of item #3.

As far as the Milestones section do we include some wording that "Milestones are [dynamic] [continuously updated] as new extensions are accepted into the working group"?


Thanks
Roger


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From: EppExt [mailto:eppext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James Galvin
Sent: Tuesday, July 21, 2015 3:50 AM
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Subject: [eppext] draft charter for discussion

Attached is your Chairs' proposed draft charter for discussion during our meeting on Wednesday, and continued follow up on this list.

If you have comments and suggestions please do feel free to send them to the list in advance of the meeting discussion.  After Wednesday we will seek consensus on the list regarding this charter and the future of the working group.

Thanks,

Jim and Antoin

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