Re: [eppext] [IANA #814916] INSERT “Extensible Provisioning Protocol Mapping: NameWatch"

"Gould, James" <JGould@verisign.com> Mon, 06 April 2015 15:30 UTC

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To: Alexander Mayrhofer <alexander.mayrhofer@nic.at>
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Alexander,

Thank you for the review.  Below is my feedback.


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JG


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James Gould
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On Apr 6, 2015, at 10:46 AM, Alexander Mayrhofer <alexander.mayrhofer@nic.at<mailto:alexander.mayrhofer@nic.at>> wrote:

Hello,

I have completed my review of the extension registration request, and  i have no significant comments. Minor comments are:

- Again, my concerns about the "VERISIGN PROPRIETARY INFORMATION" paragraph apply to this specification as well

Same response to the copyright notice concern.

- The information in 3.1.2ff about what is returned to non-sponsoring clients contradicts slightly with text in 2 ("viewed and modified by the sponsoring client" [only?]).


The text in 2 “viewed and modified by the sponsoring client” may be somewhat misleading since it doesn’t state explicitly whether non-sponsoring clients can view the data, so it could be made more explicit.  The text in 3.1.2 is authoritative for the capabilities of the info command and response.

(Note: I have not validated the XML schema)

tia,
Alex

-----BEGIN FORM-----
Name of Extension:
“Extensible Provisioning Protocol Mapping: NameWatch"

Document Status:
Informational

Reference:
http://www.verisigninc.com/assets/namewatch-mapping.pdf

Registrant Name and Email Address:
VeriSign Inc., epp-registry@verisign.com

TLDs: .name

IPR Disclosure: None

Status: Active

Notes: None
-----END FORM-----

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