[eppext] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-eppext-tmch-smd-04: (with COMMENT)

"Benoit Claise" <bclaise@cisco.com> Thu, 18 February 2016 07:39 UTC

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Here is Tim Wicinski's OPS DIR review.
General Summary: Ready with nits

In doing this write up after I wrote my comments, I went and researched
the mail archive, and I found Russ Housley's very succinct Gen-Art
review:

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/jBbrcEzrRlSPWGcjEVdvTO41ckQ

Specifically the Appendix in the wrong place, the insertion of copyrights
in Sections 3.1 and 3.2

Additionally, in Section 2 "Object Description" there are elements for
the objects that are marked OPTIONAL or MUST. However, there are many
which are not defined either way.  The "assumption" is they are a MUST.
If this is true perhaps some text at the beginning of the definitions

    "Unless otherwise specified, any element defined is a MUST".