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Re: [eppext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay-03.txt

"Gould, James" <JGould@verisign.com> Tue, 09 June 2015 18:10 UTC

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In reviewing the latest draft, I have the following feedback:


  1.  The <authInfo> element is required for the create and the poll message (info response)?  Would it make sense to make it required only on the create, since it used for authorization and really doesn’t need to reside in the poll message itself.
  2.  The <keyrelay:crDate>, <keyrelay:reID>, and <keyrelay:acID> are described as OPTIONAL in section 3.1.2, but they are required by the XML schema (no minOccurs=“0”).
  3.  I believe that the description of the REQUIRED <keyRelayData> element in section 3.1.2 was incorrectly removed.


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On Jun 9, 2015, at 12:50 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Extensible Provisioning Protocol Extensions Working Group of the IETF.

       Title           : Key Relay Mapping for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol
       Authors         : Rik Ribbers
                         Marc Groeneweg
Filename        : draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay-03.txt
Pages           : 16
Date            : 2015-06-09

Abstract:
  This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
  mapping for a key relay object that relays DNSSEC key material
  between EPP clients using the poll queue defined in [RFC5730].

  This key relay mapping will help facilitate changing the DNS operator
  of a domain while keeping the DNSSEC chain of trust intact.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay/

There's also a htmlized version available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay-03

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-eppext-keyrelay-03


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