Re: [eppext] [IANA #814915] INSERT “Extensible Provisioning Protocol Mapping: Defensive Registration"

Alexander Mayrhofer <alexander.mayrhofer@nic.at> Thu, 02 April 2015 15:36 UTC

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From: Alexander Mayrhofer <alexander.mayrhofer@nic.at>
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>, "eppext@ietf.org" <eppext@ietf.org>
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Hi,

I've finished my review of the extension registration request, and my (nit-picking) comments are as follows:

- The previous comment about the "VERISIGN PROPRIETORY INFORMATION" does apply to the document as well.

 - section 3.1.1 mentions "fully qualified names of the Defensive Registration objects", but then lists the name of the objects in 
the example as "doe" and "john.doe". Understanding this is for the ".name" TLD, those objects don't seem to be "fully qualified", as 
they are missing the TLD (assuming these are objects related to domain names..). I do understand that Section 2.1 defines the format 
of the Defensive registrations, but the relation to "fully qualified" remains unclear..

- For the IDN case, the document could clarify the format of the Defensive registration "name" element. It's pretty obvious from the example
what's intended, but not specified in text. 

- I didn't formally check the XML Schema definition.

tia,
Alex


> -----BEGIN FORM-----
> Name of Extension:
> “Extensible Provisioning Protocol Mapping: Defensive Registration"
> 
> Document Status:
> Informational
> 
> Reference:
> http://www.verisigninc.com/assets/defensive-registration-mapping.pdf
> 
> Registrant Name and Email Address:
> VeriSign Inc., epp-registry@verisign.com
> 
> TLDs: .name
> 
> IPR Disclosure: None
> 
> Status: Active
> 
> Notes: None
> -----END FORM-----