Re: [eppext] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-eppext-launchphase

Rik Ribbers <rik.ribbers@sidn.nl> Tue, 21 July 2015 14:28 UTC

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All,

I finished the review. There is one issue that I raised earlier that (imho) needs some more clarification in the document.

See http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/eppext/current/msg00585.html 

We have interpreted section 2.3 different then the other implementers with respect to the normal or vanilla (as Alexander suggested) domain check. 

Having fully re-read the draft I am not sure if this issue should be addressed here or in the lozano functional specification 
(https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lozano-tmch-func-spec/). However the last is expired and not getting any attention. In this draft there are several requirements concerning Domain Registration, there are no requirements concerning Domain Availability. So if nothing is specified the vanilla domain check can be used.

However section 2.3 suggest one MUST provide a launchphase...... so what to do....

My suggestion is to add a few wording (slightly different then my previous proposal):

** old **
The <launch:phase> element MUST be included by the client to define the target launch phase of the command. 

** new **
The <launch:phase> element MUST be included by the client to define the target launch phase of the command when using this EPP extension.

Gr,
Rik 


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Subject: [eppext] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-eppext-launchphase

Greetings,

This is the starting of the WGLC on the Launch Phase Mapping for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP).
There was extensive discussion on the mailing list, an we believe the outcome is incorporated in the document and is ready for WGLC.
The current version of this document can be found here:

  https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-eppext-launchphase-05.txt

We'll have a 1,5 week period for comments, closing on Friday, 31 July 2015.

During last call the chairs are looking for a document shepherd for this document.
If you're interested, please contact the chairs. The document authors can not be the shepherd.

thanks,

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Antoin Verschuren

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