Re: [eppext] [IANA #826994] Registration request for EPP extension

I have completed my review of the extension as DE and I'm not aware of any conflicts with existing IETF work or other known extensions. I have the following comments to share,

#1 P10 Section 3
"Note that the response MIGHT contain a msgQ element if there are messages queued.” Since the response is conformed with RFC5730, IMO it’s not necessary to add this sentence. Because msgQ element is supported in <poll> command defined in RFC5730.

#2 P14 Section 5
In this seciton, a <poll> command extension is specified to get object information which has no clTRID. It is better to describe the specific supported child elements in this section, although we can find it in the xsd file. 

In P15 example response, I notice that there is no message in "<msg lang="en"> </msg>”.

#3 P20 Section 6.5

A specific requirements for the following extension is strongly recommended here.

Extensions 
<iis:infData/> will be returned for the sponsoring client in <extension/>. It can contain: 
<iis:clientDelete/> - the clienteDelete state of the domain 
<iis:deactDate/> - the date when the domain will be deactivated 
<iis:delDate/> - the date when the domain will be deleted 
<iis:relDate/> - the date when the domain will be released 
<iis:state/> - the whois state of the domain

BTW, typo: clienteDelete —> clientDelete

#4 P24 Section 6.8
I wonder why <delete> command in RFC5731 is not supported?

#5 P34 and P35 Section 7.4
"<contact:authInfo/> is not supported.”

AuthInfo is not supported while the <info> response includes <contact: disclose> elements. I’m afraid this requirement may conflict with RFC5733.

Cheers,
Ning

> 在 2015年6月4日，16:21，Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenbeck@verisign.com> 写道：
> 
> DEs, we've received a request from IANA to review an extension registration request. Please send your comments to this list prior to 18 June 2015. Ulrich Wisser <ulrich.wisser@iis.se> sent the request on behalf of .SE.
> 
> Scott
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Amanda Baber via RT [mailto:iana-prot-param-comment@iana.org] 
> Sent: Thursday, June 04, 2015 4:14 AM
> Cc: Hollenbeck, Scott
> Subject: [IANA #826994] Registration request for EPP extension
> 
> Hi Scott,
> 
> Can you review this new extension request for us?
> 
> thanks,
> Amanda
> 
> -----BEGIN FORM-----
> 
> Name of Extension:
> ".SE extension"
> 
> Document Status: informational
> 
> Reference:
> https://www.iis.se/docs/iis-1.2.txt
> 
> Registrant Name and Email Address:
> Internet Infrastructure Foundation, hostmaster@iis.se
> 
> TLDs: .se  .nu
> 
> IPR Disclosure: None
> 
> Status: Active
> 
> Notes: Manual for the extension 
> https://www.iis.se/docs/Bilaga-10_EPP_Rules_Policies_Protocol_Description-v17.pdf  
> 
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