Re: [Extra] AD review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-00

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Wed, 23 January 2019 15:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Extra] AD review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-00
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Hi Michael,

1 small comment on the latest version:

On 22/01/2019 10:57, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
> On 22/01/2019 00:48, Michael Slusarz wrote:
>>> On January 14, 2019 at 4:59 AM Alexey Melnikov 
>>> <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote:
  [snip]
>>>
>>>> In Section 7:
>>>>
>>>>     The following syntax specification uses the augmented Backus-Naur
>>>>     Form (BNF) as described in ABNF [RFC5234].  It includes 
>>>> definitions
>>>>     from IMAP [RFC3501].
>>>>
>>>>       capability        =/ "PREVIEW=FUZZY"
>>>>
>>>> This doesn't quite much what you specify in Section 1.
>>>> Maybe change it to:
>>>>
>>>>          capability        =/ "PREVIEW=" preview-alg
>>>> ?
>>> That looks correct to me.

You forgot to include this change in the latest revision of the document.

Thank you,

Alexey