Re: [Extra] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-extra-sieve-fcc-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Ken Murchison <murch@fastmail.com> Sat, 12 January 2019 15:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Extra] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-extra-sieve-fcc-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for the review.


On 1/9/19 4:51 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> §1, last paragraph (nit): Should "each action" be "each new action"?
>
> §3.2, construction for FCC-OPTS: There is no extension point among the options,
> which would seem to require any new options update this RFC. Would it be
> reasonable to add one?


The intention is that a new option could be added as such:

FCC-OPTS /= ":foo"


or


FCC-OPTS /= BAR

BAR = ":bar" string


Is this insufficient or simply not clear from the text?


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