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Re: [Extra] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09: (with COMMENT)

Michael Slusarz <michael.slusarz@open-xchange.com> Wed, 23 September 2020 03:14 UTC

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Date: Tue, 22 Sep 2020 21:14:34 -0600
From: Michael Slusarz <michael.slusarz@open-xchange.com>
To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Extra] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09: (with COMMENT)
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> On 09/22/2020 12:43 AM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> In Section 1, this reads oddly:
> 
>    Using server-generated previews allows global generation once per
>    message, and then cached for the retention period of the source
>    message.
> 
> Perhaps add "they can be" before "cached"?

How about expanding "they" to specifically reference the preview to eliminate ambiguity?

So:

    Using server-generated previews allows global generation once per message,
    and that preview can be cached for the retention period of the source message.

michael

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