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Re: [Extra] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-quota-06

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Fri, 24 September 2021 17:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Extra] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-quota-06
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Hi Todd,

On 31/08/2021 20:30, Todd Herr via Datatracker wrote:

> Reviewer: Todd Herr
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I think Section 6 could stand to have textual descriptions of the rights
> following the table, a la Section 4 in the referenced RFC 4314. Otherwise it's
> not clear to the reader under which circumstances the "r" right is required for
> GETQUOTAROOT.

Thank you for the suggestion. I've added it to the document.

Best Regards,

Alexey

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