Re: [Fecframe] WGLC draft-ietf-fecframe-ldpc-00

"Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com> Mon, 28 November 2011 17:10 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
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This document also reads well, text is largely based on the previous RS draft. Mostly editorial comments:

- Section 3.1: Again why not refer to 6363 for all definitions and use the exact wording from 6363. Alternatively, just remove the text and simply refer to 6363.
- Figure 1 should be identical to figure 2 in 6363.
- Remove the spaces in the fssi example.
- SDP elements draft is now 6364.

Cheers,
-acbegen

> -----Original Message-----
> From: fecframe-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:fecframe-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Greg Shepherd
> Sent: Wednesday, September 14, 2011 10:18 AM
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> Subject: [Fecframe] WGLC draft-ietf-fecframe-ldpc-00
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> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-fecframe-ldpc/
> 
> ..and another WGLC. Please read and provide feedback so we can close
> the group before Taipei and give David something to brag about. ;-)
> 
> Thanks!,
> Greg
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