Re: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?

hi,
Yes. I think ONE person writes one section first, so that the writing content and style are consistent throughout the section. Others give the comments and help the main editor improve it. 
Now let's volunteer to become the main editor of each section.
Best regards
Ligang
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Robert Haas 
  To: Khosravi, Hormuzd M 
  Cc: hadi@znyx.com ; forces-protocol@ietf.org ; avri@psg.com ; ram.gopal@nokia.com ; Ligang Dong ; Weiming Wang 
  Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 10:04 PM
  Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?

  Hormuzd,
  Section 6 is heavily impacted by the shift to "everything is an LFB". Many sections and figures require complete re-editing. To ensure consistency, we need one person to do one editing pass on the entire section first. But your list says "everybody". 

  What if I do this first pass before tomorrow ? Or has anyone started already ?

  It also means that our description of the FE Protocol LFB must be enhanced, possibly including the multicast table that Zsolt started specifying.

  Regards,
  -Robert

  Khosravi, Hormuzd M wrote:

Here is the distribution list...

Abstract - Avri
1. Introduction - Avri
2. Definitions - Weiming
3. Protocol Overview - Jamal
4. TML Requirements - Jamal
5. Common Header - Weiming, Ligang (Jamal/Robert)
6. Protocol Messages - Hormuzd, Weiming (I expect everyone to be
involved with this one)
7. Protocol Scenarios - Hormuzd, Ram
8. High Availability - Hormuzd
9. Security Considerations - Ram
10. References - Avri
11. Acknowledgments - All
Appendix
A. Implementation Notes - All?

I will directly modify the text for my particular section and send it
out to the team/Avri on a per section or per-subsection basis. That was
we can all work in parallel.

regards
Hormuzd 

-----Original Message-----
From: Jamal Hadi Salim [mailto:hadi@znyx.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2004 5:35 AM
To: forces-protocol@ietf.org
Cc: avri@psg.com; Khosravi, Hormuzd M; ram.gopal@nokia.com; Ligang Dong;
Weiming Wang; Robert Haas
Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] Re: protocol draft editing?

Avri must be on travel or tied up somewhere around the globe.
The latest i could find is:
http://psg.com/~avri/forces/draft/Archive-Forces-Protocol-02.zip

Does anyone know if theres something newer or should we start here?
Hormuzd can you post that todo distribution?

cheers,
jamal

On Tue, 2004-10-19 at 19:23, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote:
  On Tue, 2004-10-19 at 11:07, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote:
    Now that we seem to have made progress on the basics..
Avri,
Could you post a URL to the xml docs that we could start editing?
We could start with the TODO action items as posted by Hormuzd.

cheers,
jamal
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