Re: [Forces-protocol] FE Protocol LFB, FE LFB, CE LFB (draft sections) to review.

avri@psg.com Sat, 23 October 2004 18:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] FE Protocol LFB, FE LFB, CE LFB (draft sections) to review.
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On 23 okt 2004, at 05.27, Robert Haas wrote:

> All,
> Below is a new draft of the sections related to FE/Protocol LFBs. 
> Please review.

http://psg.com/~avri/forces/draft/draft-ietf-forces-protocol-01-4.txt
includes changes i have received so far and includes the text you sent.

>
> I will also try to add a table summarizing the operations allowed in 
> each type of PL message. I sent it in a previous message.

i missed that.  do you want me to build the table?

>
> BTW, I find it a bit odd to have Query messages defined before Config 
> messages in Section "Protocol Messages". Does anyone mind changing the 
> order ?

Moved.

>
> Avri,
> Please send the xml files once you have updated them. I'll then 
> incorporate my text below directly taking suggestions/comments into 
> account, unless you want to do it ;-)

with 1-2 days left to finish, i don't mind making the changes.  as i 
will be going through cleaning up format, fixing some xrefs and doing a 
language edit, it would be easiest at this point if people just send me 
text changes.

i.e. not whole new text, but something of the sort:

old text:
bla bla bla

new text:
better bla, better bla, better bla.

(regular unix diffs work just fine. :-)

but if this is not ok with you, then i will send youi the changed xml 
files.

>
> BTW, we'll have to remove the State maintenance section and add a new 
> chapter for these LFBs (new xml file ?).
>
>

At an earlier request, i removed the State maintenance section (i 
think).  let me know what you want inserted.

i will probably put out another version later today/tonight.


cheers
a.


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