Re: [Forces-protocol] FE Protocol LFB, FE LFB, CE LFB (draft sections) to review.

Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@znyx.com> Sat, 23 October 2004 19:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] FE Protocol LFB, FE LFB, CE LFB (draft sections) to review.
From: Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@znyx.com>
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I think it is fair to separate in the acknowledgements the original
proposal authors from others. Right now they are all lumped as:

"The authors of this draft would like to acknowledge and thank all the
 protocol proposal authors"

Sorry, thats all i read so far ;-> But i do plan to scrutinize this version.

cheers,
jamal

On Sat, 2004-10-23 at 14:17, avri@psg.com wrote:
> On 23 okt 2004, at 05.27, Robert Haas wrote:
> 
> > All,
> > Below is a new draft of the sections related to FE/Protocol LFBs. 
> > Please review.
> 
> http://psg.com/~avri/forces/draft/draft-ietf-forces-protocol-01-4.txt
> includes changes i have received so far and includes the text you sent.
> 
> >
> > I will also try to add a table summarizing the operations allowed in 
> > each type of PL message. I sent it in a previous message.
> 
> i missed that.  do you want me to build the table?
> 
> >
> > BTW, I find it a bit odd to have Query messages defined before Config 
> > messages in Section "Protocol Messages". Does anyone mind changing the 
> > order ?
> 
> Moved.
> 
> >
> > Avri,
> > Please send the xml files once you have updated them. I'll then 
> > incorporate my text below directly taking suggestions/comments into 
> > account, unless you want to do it ;-)
> 
> with 1-2 days left to finish, i don't mind making the changes.  as i 
> will be going through cleaning up format, fixing some xrefs and doing a 
> language edit, it would be easiest at this point if people just send me 
> text changes.
> 
> i.e. not whole new text, but something of the sort:
> 
> old text:
> bla bla bla
> 
> new text:
> better bla, better bla, better bla.
> 
> (regular unix diffs work just fine. :-)
> 
> but if this is not ok with you, then i will send youi the changed xml 
> files.
> 
> >
> > BTW, we'll have to remove the State maintenance section and add a new 
> > chapter for these LFBs (new xml file ?).
> >
> >
> 
> At an earlier request, i removed the State maintenance section (i 
> think).  let me know what you want inserted.
> 
> i will probably put out another version later today/tonight.
> 
> 
> cheers
> a.
> 


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