Re: [Forces-protocol] RE: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-01-0.txt

Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@znyx.com> Fri, 22 October 2004 19:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Forces-protocol] RE: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-01-0.txt
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Cc: "Khosravi, Hormuzd M" <hormuzd.m.khosravi@intel.com>, ram.gopal@nokia.com, "Wang, Weiming" <wmwang@mail.hzic.edu.cn>, avri@acm.org, forces-protocol@ietf.org, Ligang Dong <donglg@mail.hzic.edu.cn>
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On Fri, 2004-10-22 at 14:53, Robert Haas wrote:
> Weiming,
> I have a few suggestions for your sections. See inline. Please review
> them and indicate to Avri if she should incorporate these into the
> final draft. It would be good if Avri could do the english-check on
> these sections to as I am not a native english speaker neither
> Regards,

Hormuzd, 
Can we have a quick concal over the weekend at some point?
I think we need to go over section six and the rest really quickly.

cheers,
jamal


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