Re: [forces] [RTG-DIR] RTG-DIR review of ForCES Inter-FE LFB (draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb-04.txt)
Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@mojatatu.com> Thu, 26 May 2016 11:29 UTC
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From: Jamal Hadi Salim <hadi@mojatatu.com>
Date: Thu, 26 May 2016 07:29:12 -0400
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Subject: Re: [forces] [RTG-DIR] RTG-DIR review of ForCES Inter-FE LFB (draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb-04.txt)
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Hi Sue, Appreciate the review. All your suggested changes will be reflected in version 5 (which i hope we will get out by worst case the weekend). cheers, jamal On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 10:44 AM, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> wrote: > Hello: > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. > The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related > drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes > on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to > the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please > see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it > would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last > Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through > discussion or by updating the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb-04.txt > > Reviewer: Susan Hares > > Date: 5/25/2016 > > IETF End Date: unknown > > Intended Status: Standards track > > > > Summary: This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits > that should be considered before publication. > > > > Comments: > > · Document contains good technical content for extending the > Forces work into an Inter-FE LFB. The document is easily read, but a few > nits would improve its readability. > > · My hand check of the inter-FE LFB XML model indicated all XML > is fine. If an automated check of the XML with the Forces LFBs, it would > be useful to run this check. > > · The improvement in the congestion consideration section (5.1.3) > between -03 and -04 was necessary. > > > > Major issues: none > > > > Nits: > > Page 9 figure 5. – the between figure lines is not aligned. > > This line begins with the “Ethernet Frame with:” > > > > Page 12 – > > Old > > /(XXX: note to editor/ > > New /(XXX: note to RFC editor/ > > > > Page 15 > > Old /original payload i.e. skips the IFE header information./ > > New /original payload (i.e. skips the IFE header information)/ > > > > Page 21 > > > > Old > > /This memo includes one IANA requests within the registry > https://www.iana.org/assignments/forces/ > > > > New > > /This memo includes one IANA request within the registry > https://www.iana.org/assignments/forces. / > > > > p. 22 > > Old /As such, it has no impact on their security considerations./ > > New/ As such, it has no impact on these documents security considerations./ > > > > Sue Hares > > > > >
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