Return-Path: X-Original-To: forces@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: forces@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A97321ACDDE for ; Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:33 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -0.599 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.599 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_05=-0.5, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id IV5j1H1i-i4s for ; Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:31 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-wi0-x22f.google.com (mail-wi0-x22f.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:400c:c05::22f]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 5CC031ACDE7 for ; Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:23 -0700 (PDT) Received: by widdi4 with SMTP id di4so12581041wid.0 for ; Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:21 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=from:to:subject:date:message-id:mime-version:content-type :thread-index:content-language; bh=lvnfF1OwJvh12lMEzvS/j0EcL0ovFUDW+/Fxy+1w1QU=; b=TGWnojO+tBYJQ75Yc+c3UeVjp1l9X0iQFw1ZiFFd1UCXfdNa1opgLlYTkC+kslXRW7 7n1cUfn9X/7N/Qk8+Bz+qptqM/d0rIxJY2cSbzTJPTbJeLy23FPXUU+k6BXU8wEQNI2J YFRNXgSt/Fst5feF+fxpwH55RuaHgbz0lFkyhZSKQsrDGXjeMoqaqcedklTNNG/cmnYn uYneRbXh9FFYgVlPA2KdBd1ptZ7djZpKl3HS+Fnzm10rMd+k1bYxwnj+R8/hmSECO3If Zwwwgyi4N6/jcRbk+UplU3wgZUjDeQVvWsDk4iG8IfQkOb1OMxPb6NJsBbSbCxa5XcfK e1ug== X-Received: by 10.180.73.132 with SMTP id l4mr6260985wiv.27.1427814081832; Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:21 -0700 (PDT) Received: from EhalepXPS (ppp141237082208.access.hol.gr. [141.237.82.208]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPSA id bx3sm20718653wjc.21.2015.03.31.08.01.20 for (version=TLSv1 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-SHA bits=128/128); Tue, 31 Mar 2015 08:01:20 -0700 (PDT) From: "Haleplidis Evangelos" To: Date: Tue, 31 Mar 2015 18:01:15 +0300 Message-ID: <00e501d06bc3$8b3fbfb0$a1bf3f10$@com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_00E6_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0" X-Mailer: Microsoft Office Outlook 12.0 Thread-Index: AdBrw4kYQIxkNQP/SDewb0RNfoewNw== Content-Language: el Archived-At: Subject: [forces] Shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb X-BeenThere: forces@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: ForCES WG mailing list List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 31 Mar 2015 15:01:33 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_00E6_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_001_00E7_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0" ------=_NextPart_001_00E7_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Greetings to the list, Attached is the shepherd write-up for the draft-ietf-forces-interfelfb. With regards, Evangelos Haleplidis. ------=_NextPart_001_00E7_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

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With = regards,

Evangelos = Haleplidis.

------=_NextPart_001_00E7_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0-- ------=_NextPart_000_00E6_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0 Content-Type: text/plain; name="writeup-interfelfb.txt" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="writeup-interfelfb.txt" 1. Summary The document shepherd is Evangelos Haleplidis The responsible Area Director is Alia Atlas The document describes extending the ForCES LFB topology across FEs i.e inter-FE connectivity without needing any changes to the ForCES specification by defining the Inter-FE LFB. The Inter-FE LFB provides ability to pass data, metadata and exceptions across FEs. The document describes a generic way to transport the mentioned details but focuses on ethernet transport. 2. Review and Consensus The document is straightforward, and there was no difficulty in coming=20 to consensus on all points described. There were discussion between a couple of members of the working group, but all issues have been = addressed prior to this document being accepted as a working group document. At = least one implementation has validated the features described in the document. = =20 There were no issues reported during the last call and therefore we = believe the working group is solidly behind this document.=20 3. Intellectual Property The authors have confirmed conformance with BCP 78/79.=20 There are no IPR disclosures on the document. 4. Other Points a) There is a error nit from idnits: ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 3746 b) There a number of spelling errors. Please use = https://tools.ietf.org/tools/idspell/webservice to fix. For example:=20 1. "focusses" -> "focuses" 2. "ethernet" -> "Ethernet" 3. "metadatum" -> "Metadatum" 4. "learnt" -> "learned" 5. "Higig" -> "HiGig" c) There are a couple of editorial issues: 1. End of Page 3: "Details on how a graph of LFB class instances can be = created can be derived by the..." Please fix the:=20 can be created can be derived" 2. Page 6: "as well egress ports." -> "as well as egress ports." (same = issue in page 9) 3. Page 7: "Each Network function." -> "Each Network Function." 4. Page 8: "The setup in Figure 3 can be split out across 3 FEs instead = as demonstrated in Figure 4" -> "instead of" 5. Page 11: "This includes what of the of the original metadata" double = "of the" 6. Page 24 - Last sentence "control. this" -> "control. This" d) Would it make sense to use the newer version of the model (1.1)? e) You need to change the IANA metadata ID request from "0x00000010" to = "0x00000011". 0x00000010 has already been registered by RFC 7409. f) In the XML, you have set the LFB class ID to 6612, but in the IANA = request, you have requested the reservation of class ID 6112. Please = select one. ------=_NextPart_000_00E6_01D06BDC.B08CF7B0--