Re: [forces] AD review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-subsidiary-management-01

["B. Khasnabish" <[e-mail]>]

​Hi Alia,

Thanks a lot. Yes, we'll do the updates based on
your suggestions, and publish the revised draft soon.

Best.

Bhumip
​
​


On Fri, Jul 31, 2015 at 3:47 PM, Alia Atlas <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Bhumip, Evangelos, and Jamal,
>
> Thanks for your work on this draft. As is customary, I have done my AD
> review of the draft before asking that it go forward to IETF Last Call.
>
> I have only a few quibbles, so I have advanced this to IETF Last Call.  It
> is on the IESG telechat on Sept 3.    Please do respond and update the
> draft during IETF Last Call.  As you well know, having authors who are
> extremely responsive helps greatly with getting these final steps done.
>
> Minor quibbles:
>
> 1) In Sec. 4.4.3, two of the capabilities are described as placeholders.
> Can you please clarify what the expected standardized behavior is?  I
> imagine that the capabilities are filled out as described - though with
> unstandardized information.
>
> 2) In Sec. 4.2, could you please provide a reference to the syslog
> severity levels?  For instance, the IANA registry (
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/syslog-parameters/syslog-parameters.xhtml#syslog-parameters-2
> ) and/or RFC 3164 would be lovely.
>
> 3) In the Security Considerations section, a few words about why it is ok
> to trust a CE to create a connection to another CE would be useful.
>
> Thanks,
> Alia
>