From: "Jose Saldana" <jsaldana@unizar.es>
To: "'gaia'" <gaia@irtf.org>
Date: Tue, 26 Apr 2016 16:37:24 +0200
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Cc: 'Matthew Ford' <ford@isoc.org>
Subject: [gaia] Next version (05) of the "alternative networks" draft
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Hi all,

We have just uploaded a new version of the draft.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-gaia-alternative-network-depl=
oyments/

There are some issues still being discussed, but we think people would =
like to have an updated version of the draft.

You can see the differences with respect to the previous version here:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=3Ddraft-irtf-gaia-alternative-network-d=
eployments-04&url2=3Ddraft-irtf-gaia-alternative-network-deployments-05


The structure of the document has not been substantially modified. Only =
the titles of Section 6.2.1.2, and some subsections of 7.3 have been =
changed.

Regarding the content, many paragraphs have been improved, and new =
references added, according to the feedback in the list and the fruitful =
discussion. I think the document is much better now.

A number of references have been added.


We hope we will be able to submit a new version soon, once some of the =
things still under discussion are agreed:

- Rural fiber: =
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gaia/current/msg01290.html

- Title of Section 4.2., and some other subsections: =
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gaia/current/msg01287.html

- Including DTN or not =
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gaia/current/msg01274.html

- etc.


Best regards and thanks a lot,

Jose


> -----Mensaje original-----
> De: gaia [mailto:gaia-bounces@irtf.org] En nombre de Matthew Ford
> Enviado el: martes, 12 de abril de 2016 11:39
> Para: Jose Saldana <jsaldana@unizar.es>
> CC: gaia <gaia@irtf.org>; Lars Eggert <lars@netapp.com>; Arjuna =
Sathiaseelan
> <arjuna.sathiaseelan@cl.cam.ac.uk>
> Asunto: Re: [gaia] Comments on: =
draft-irtf-gaia-alternative-network-deployments
>=20
> Hi Jose,
>=20
> > On 12 Apr 2016, at 09:06, Jose Saldana <jsaldana@unizar.es> wrote:
> >
> > This is my two-step proposal:
> >
> > 1) We (the authors, and myself as the editor) will build a new =
version
> > (05) of the document including the suggestions of the last week, but
> > without substantially modifying it. I think we can do it this week =
(we
> > have already included a number of small improvements). We may ask =
for
> > feedback from the people who have suggested some changes.
> >
>=20
> We have had a lot of good input on the list recently which is great! =
It=E2=80=99s unfortunate
> that it arrived when it did, but I don=E2=80=99t think it should be =
set aside because of
> procedural concerns.
>=20
> So, yes, please work on a new rev that addresses recent input and =
comments as
> you are willing and when we have that in hand the chairs can decide =
how to
> proceed. Working with those people suggesting changes sounds like a =
very sensible
> approach.
>=20
> Mat
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