[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Sat, 11 February 2012 10:13 UTC
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-simple-chat-13 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 12-02.11 IETF LC End Date: 12-02-06 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Ready, but some additional text may be needed based on the minor issues. Major issues: None Minor issues: - The second paragraph of section 7.1 says that a NICKNAME request MUST contain a Use-Nickname header, but in the sixth paragraph the inclusion is a SHOULD. - It is not clearly indicated whether the Use-Nickname header is allowed for other methods than NICKNAME. - Section 8 does not specify whether there are SDP offer/answer considerations/restrictions associated with the new attribute. For example: -- Must the attribute tokens in an answer be a subset of the tokens in an offer? -- Can an SDP answer contain an attribute if the offer didn't? -- If a user sends a new SDP offer within a session, can the token values be modified? What does it mean if the attribute is not present in a new SDP offer? Nits/editorial comments: - Sometimes the document talks about "multi-party chat", "multi-party conference", "conference", and "chat room". Would it be possible to use more consistant terminology? - Requirements -- REQ-4: Isn't this requirement already covered by REQ-3? -- REQ-6: Change "progress" to "duration" or "length". - There is no definition/reference for "roster". Regards, Christer
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-cha… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Christer Holmberg