Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E7C831B3677 for ; Mon, 20 Apr 2015 23:58:14 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.91 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.91 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id WpXP22tsJoZq for ; Mon, 20 Apr 2015 23:58:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from p130.piuha.net (p130.piuha.net [193.234.218.130]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1DE561B3674 for ; Mon, 20 Apr 2015 23:58:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by p130.piuha.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6DF682CC5F; Tue, 21 Apr 2015 09:58:12 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from jari.arkko@piuha.net) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at piuha.net Received: from p130.piuha.net ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (p130.piuha.net [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id arnqA-S5X39K; Tue, 21 Apr 2015 09:58:11 +0300 (EEST) Received: from [127.0.0.1] (p130.piuha.net [IPv6:2a00:1d50:2::130]) by p130.piuha.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id C22842CC5D; Tue, 21 Apr 2015 09:58:10 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from jari.arkko@piuha.net) Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="Apple-Mail=_8F18103B-9BD1-4642-A1F3-7FEE2222858A"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha512 Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.3 \(1878.6\)) From: Jari Arkko In-Reply-To: <1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278@eusaamb105.ericsson.se> Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2015 09:58:09 +0300 Message-Id: References: <7594FB04B1934943A5C02806D1A2204B1D793877@ESESSMB209.ericsson.se> <1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278@eusaamb105.ericsson.se> To: Uma Chunduri X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1878.6) Archived-At: Cc: "gen-art@ietf.org" , "draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org" Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2015 06:58:15 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_8F18103B-9BD1-4642-A1F3-7FEE2222858A Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252 Thanks for your review, Christer. I have balloted no-objection for this = draft in the upcoming IESG telechat. Jari On 13 Apr 2015, at 07:10, Uma Chunduri = wrote: > Hi Christer, > =20 > Thanks for your review and I shall address both comments you made = below in the next revision. > =20 > -- > Uma C. > =20 > From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]=20 > Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2015 5:56 AM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 > =20 > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on = Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at = > =20 > Document: = draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 > =20 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > =20 > Review Date: 11 April 2015 > =20 > IETF LC End Date: 8 April 2015 > =20 > IETF Telechat Date: N/A > =20 > Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for = publication. I only have a couple of minor editorial comments (see = below). =20 > =20 > Major Issues: None > =20 > Minor Issues: None > =20 > Editorial nits: > =20 > Q1: In the Introduction, please expand =93IS-IS=94 on first = occurrence (outside the Abstract) > =20 > Q2: In the Introduction, could you add some reference to = =93IS-IS=94 on the first occurrence? > =20 > =20 > _______________________________________________ > Isis-wg mailing list > Isis-wg@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/isis-wg --Apple-Mail=_8F18103B-9BD1-4642-A1F3-7FEE2222858A Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=signature.asc Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Comment: GPGTools - https://gpgtools.org iQIcBAEBCgAGBQJVNfUBAAoJEM80gCTQU46qhvYP/3RmuuzA4DLu27VQJN9C7uVK 2t2oOK3+TEzY9uGtO7yiqPd4gOE8i0gtgKtrMTngIpP+pFHaRbAIOOmOHbjzjltu QA6raaJCAijDEs+KyJChZGNQCq+J7nuU5lQIgNrZ7D6ZjXRYxLe9YVhceRhXRmDH UZ2BY5g6uyfoaWYk8EmcDKBC1FADi2KYGrwfnFUJ39lZBppUAec/Ho1RM/rSFDQO aUn5cgWH4Cd2C7RWnxbEO7i325Y/TDnqI1fMm8dwHzIfaj1ik9TdK1vu2Ik68O0Z jEix4m5nTnrOlt0tBbxfoyqCMxsSIzyiC6ZX05Kyhzlf1fMnfsX7p3zfusq5DYBD 5PXA9YNUmy6YsRxxY0UIX/91tkvBxCwquyMQuPkDnBJIdfOId5w72InZuiBHlsnc vqvMBRADoPf1xH/OwAu8xdin0RdDA5MP6H9JoYsSJu49Kg6wwuAmkr1NL45cguQk zPrd3qe5g2iX0w64FdjxNqMbyke3ECcU+Hz4JjULGmCuRoMYDP1qUjBZkxv+mWdE 14zk3NBP91vOh7Jg82lG/y1r9YDWZ6R8tJ7pmqlxynqM/AwuW4rFyV8s7YC98c3J h5qZ7vTw0ljek6YLxuCfIvKhCd+ftXly6skk3sOUZMsrPbUEg3HS7oz0N6h/P77L 3neIAOYjlvBui7QCFz+5 =+5AM -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --Apple-Mail=_8F18103B-9BD1-4642-A1F3-7FEE2222858A--