[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Mon, 16 January 2012 14:14 UTC
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 16 January 2012 IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012 IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: - The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchors, but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those. Regards, Christer
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-netext-… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-net… Sri Gundavelli