Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9C70521F85F9 for ; Mon, 16 Jan 2012 06:14:05 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -6.349 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.349 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=0.249, BAYES_00=-2.599, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-4] Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 6ceelIEbSEGu for ; Mon, 16 Jan 2012 06:14:05 -0800 (PST) Received: from mailgw9.se.ericsson.net (mailgw9.se.ericsson.net [193.180.251.57]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B804F21F85F7 for ; Mon, 16 Jan 2012 06:14:04 -0800 (PST) X-AuditID: c1b4fb39-b7b3eae00000252a-78-4f1430ab19bb Received: from esessmw0237.eemea.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [153.88.253.124]) by mailgw9.se.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 06.5D.09514.BA0341F4; Mon, 16 Jan 2012 15:14:03 +0100 (CET) Received: from ESESSCMS0356.eemea.ericsson.se ([169.254.1.175]) by esessmw0237.eemea.ericsson.se ([153.88.115.90]) with mapi; Mon, 16 Jan 2012 15:14:03 +0100 From: Christer Holmberg To: "gen-art@ietf.org" , "draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration.all@tools.ietf.org" Date: Mon, 16 Jan 2012 15:14:02 +0100 Thread-Topic: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 Thread-Index: AczUWRlGUu2i6Iu9Q0a0DPbIsKzuZA== Message-ID: <7F2072F1E0DE894DA4B517B93C6A05852C3D2970B7@ESESSCMS0356.eemea.ericsson.se> Accept-Language: en-US Content-Language: en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: acceptlanguage: en-US Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_7F2072F1E0DE894DA4B517B93C6A05852C3D2970B7ESESSCMS0356e_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Brightmail-Tracker: AAAAAA== Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 16 Jan 2012 14:14:05 -0000 --_000_7F2072F1E0DE894DA4B517B93C6A05852C3D2970B7ESESSCMS0356e_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-AR= T, please see the FAQ at . Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting = a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 16 January 2012 IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012 IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that s= hould be fixed before publication. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: - The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchor= s, but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those. Regards, Christer --_000_7F2072F1E0DE894DA4B517B93C6A05852C3D2970B7ESESSCMS0356e_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on G= en-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.iet= f.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before pos= ting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09

Reviewer: Christer Holmberg

Review Date: 16 January 2012

IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012

IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits t= hat should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:

- The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility a= nchors, but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those.=

Regards,

Christer

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