Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
Dong Jiang <knight.dongjiang@gmail.com> Sat, 07 November 2015 17:19 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
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Dear Meral, Thank you for the comments! We will revise the draft accordingly. Br, Jiang 2015-11-07 1:19 GMT+02:00 Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> : > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11 > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > > Review Date: 2015-11-06 > > IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15 > > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > > > Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I > have some comments. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -Please consider spelling out all acronyms, e.g. NLRI-NH > > -[Page 4], 6.1,"If the software"--?-->"softwire" > > -[Page 13], "vulnerability:" --?-->"vulnerability." > > > > > > > > Best Regards, > > Meral > > --- > > Meral Shirazipour > > Ericsson > > Research > > www.ericsson.com >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Dong Jiang