[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 13 January 2023 23:57 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-01-13
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
comments than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
The abstract (scope) may be re-written more clearly (Section 1 Intro is clear).

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-a… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Lars Eggert