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Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-ospf-bier-extensions-12

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 22 February 2018 04:48 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2018 20:48:14 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-ospf-bier-extensions-12
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Robert, thanks for your review. It appears that your concerns have been addressed in -20 (thanks, authors!). I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 19, 2018, at 10:59 AM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Almost Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-bier-ospf-bier-extensions-12
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2018-02-19
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22
> 
> Summary: Almost ready for publication as a standards track RFC
> 
> Major issue:
> The security considerations section is essentially empty (what it currently
> says reduces to "don't let malformed packets crash your implementation". Surely
> there's more to say here. Is there an assumption that, in any given deployment,
> the administrators of the bier layer and the ospf layer are the same people,
> and have the same authority? If so, it's probably worth saying so. If not, are
> there edges to discuss? If this document really doesn't introduce any new
> security considerations, it should argue why that's the case.
> 
> Minor issues:
> Is there a reason not to use the example/documentation IPV4 address ranges?
> (See the shepherd writeup). The author count is above the current
> RFC-Editor/IESG recommendations. Work that out with your ADs.
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