Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification for draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00.txt

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Mon, 27 April 2015 14:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification for draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00.txt
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Robert:

Thanks for addressing my comments on -00.

Section 3.3 could use some formatting attention.  The first and second bullets have sub-bulltes, but they are done differently.  There is also a fair amount of extra blank lines.

Russ


On Jan 27, 2015, at 1:36 PM, Robert Sparks wrote:

> IESG folk -
> 
> I would like to get input from all the review teams on this document (particularly from secretaries).
> Could you forward this to each of your teams, and/or let me know who the best contact for each is?
> 
> RjS
> 
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject:	New Version Notification for draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00.txt
> Date:	Tue, 27 Jan 2015 05:38:03 -0800
> From:	internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To:	Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>, Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Robert Sparks and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:		draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker
> Revision:	00
> Title:		Tracking Reviews of Documents
> Document date:	2015-01-26
> Group:		Individual Submission
> Pages:		12
> URL:            http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker/
> Htmlized:       http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-00
> 
> 
> Abstract:
>    Several review teams ensure specific types of review are performed on
>    Internet Drafts as they progress towards becoming RFCs.  The tools
>    used by these teams to assign and track reviews would benefit from
>    tighter integration to the Datatracker.  This document discusses
>    requirements for improving those tools without disrupting current
>    work flows.
> 
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> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> The IETF Secretariat
> 
> 
>

Re: [Gen-art] New Version Notification for draft-… Russ Housley