Re: [Gen-art] [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 18 December 2018 20:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06
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Russ, thanks for your review. Vishnu, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Dec 10, 2018, at 4:49 PM, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; wrote:
> 
> Yes, those changes resolve my comments.
> 
> Russ
> 
> 
>> On Dec 10, 2018, at 12:57 AM, Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com <mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> Russ, Hi!
>> 
>> Much Thanks for the review! We just posted a new rev (-07) to address your comments. Please do go through the diffs (https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-07.txt <https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-07.txt>) and let us know if the new version adequately addresses your concern. 
>> 
>> The term "loose hop" was introduced in RFC3209. So we just added a reference to it in the relevant sentence.
>> 
>> Regards,
>> -Pavan (on behalf of the authors)
>> 
>> On Fri, Nov 30, 2018 at 1:29 PM Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>> wrote:
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review result: Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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>> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review Date: 2018-11-30
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-11 
>> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>> 
>> Summary: Ready
>> 
>> 
>> Major Concerns:
>> 
>> None
>> 
>> 
>> Minor Concerns:
>> 
>> Section 5.3: To understand this section, I had to learn about "loose
>> hops" from other sources.  Please consider adding this term to the ones
>> that are defined in Section 2.
>> 
>> 
>> Nits:
>> 
>> Throughout document: s/hop by hop/hop-by-hop/
>> 
>> Section 5.3.1: s/The net result is that by/As a result, by/
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