Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 08 January 2019 22:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Softwires] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06
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Roni, thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I entered a DISCUSS ballot concerning the security considerations.

Best,
Alissa

> On Jan 7, 2019, at 7:42 AM, ianfarrer@gmx.com wrote:
> 
> Hi Roni,
> 
> My apologies for the oversight. I’ve just posted -14 which includes the RESTCONF reference in the Introduction.
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian
> 
>> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com <mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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>> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review Date: 2018-10-08
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> 
>> Summary:
>> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
>> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
>> management. why not add restconf to introduction?
>> 
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