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Ian, thanks for your responses. I entered = a DISCUSS ballot concerning the security considerations. Best, Alissa > On Jan 7, 2019, at 7:42 AM, ianfarrer@gmx.com wrote: >=20 > Hi Roni, >=20 > My apologies for the oversight. I=E2=80=99ve just posted -14 which = includes the RESTCONF reference in the Introduction. >=20 > Thanks, > Ian >=20 >> On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even > wrote: >>=20 >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review result: Ready with Nits >>=20 >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >>=20 >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>=20 >> . >>=20 >> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-?? >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review Date: 2018-10-08 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >>=20 >> Summary: >> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with = nits >>=20 >> Major issues: >>=20 >> Minor issues: >>=20 >> Nits/editorial comments: >> 1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with = netconf , I >> noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as = network >> management. why not add restconf to introduction? >>=20 >>=20 >> _______________________________________________ >> Softwires mailing list >> Softwires@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires = >=20 > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art = --Apple-Mail=_020CCD3F-A79F-4ECC-A14C-6AED5FB8AA5B Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Roni,= thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I entered a = DISCUSS ballot concerning the security considerations.

Best,
Alissa

On Jan 7, 2019, at 7:42 AM, ianfarrer@gmx.com = wrote:

Hi Roni,

My apologies for the oversight. = I=E2=80=99ve just posted -14 which includes the RESTCONF reference in = the Introduction.

Thanks,
Ian

On 9. Oct 2018, at 09:02, Roni Even = <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote:

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with = Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for = this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews = all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the = IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like = any other last call comments.

For more = information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
IESG Telechat = date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication = as a standard track RFC with nits

Major = issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 1 it = says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security = section as network
management. why not add restconf to = introduction?


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