Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04

Alexander Mayrhofer <alex.mayrhofer.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 12 April 2018 08:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
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Meral,

thanks for the review and spotting those NITS. I've corrected the
draft accordingly, the changes will be part of a -05 revision which
should be out in the coming day.

best,
Alex


On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 12:42 AM, Meral Shirazipour
<meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>; wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
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> Document: draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2018-04-03
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> IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-04
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> IESG Telechat date: NA
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have
> comments.
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> [Page 3], Section 3 nits:
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> "(eg. "---->"(e.g. "
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> "signifcantly"---->"significantly"
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> "octects"---->"octets"
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> [Page 5], Section 4.4 nits:
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> "transction"---->"transaction"
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> [Page 5], Section 5 nits:
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> "octects."---->"octets."
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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