[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-04

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Tue, 07 April 2015 14:12 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-bidir-04.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date:  2015/04/07
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2015/04/09

Summary: Technically, ready.   The various nits that I noted in the last 
call review of version -03 have been fixed in this version - thanks.  I 
suggested in that review that a summary of the parts of the updated RFCs 
that have been affected would be useful to implementers since there are 
lots of different pieces.  This was not actioned - I am still of the 
opinion that this would be a useful addition but obviously has no 
bearing on the technical content.