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Re: [Gen-art] [dnssd] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04

Tim Chown <tjc@ecs.soton.ac.uk> Thu, 12 March 2015 12:46 UTC

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Cc: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements.all@tools.ietf.org, "gen-art@ietf.org Team (gen-art@ietf.org)" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [dnssd] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
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Yep, thanks, and Stuart for proposed text.

Tim

> On 12 Mar 2015, at 10:04, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:
> 
> Big thanks for your review, Ben.
> 
> Jari
> 
> On 23 Dec 2014, at 01:40, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> 
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
>> Reviewer: Ben Campbell
>> Review Date: 2014-12-22
>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07
>> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
>> 
>> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand.
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> None
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-)
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references.
>> 
>> -- REQ2:
>> 
>> Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero configuration mode?
>> 
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