Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C3F751A00B7 for ; Thu, 12 Mar 2015 05:46:51 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.23 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.23 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_NEUTRAL=0.779, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id vw8x6EweWY2q for ; Thu, 12 Mar 2015 05:46:48 -0700 (PDT) Received: from falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk (falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk [IPv6:2001:630:d0:f102::25e]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B5FBE1A00F8 for ; Thu, 12 Mar 2015 05:46:16 -0700 (PDT) Received: from falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id t2CCk916030848; Thu, 12 Mar 2015 12:46:09 GMT X-DKIM: Sendmail DKIM Filter v2.8.2 falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk t2CCk916030848 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha1; c=simple/simple; d=ecs.soton.ac.uk; s=201304; t=1426164370; bh=sf8hnYRQb7CeHbv82rVf2Z8CyE4=; h=Subject:Mime-Version:From:In-Reply-To:Date:Cc:References:To; b=iuSIjtOSpxUAfPu+ZvE++IV/LbVLfK4Gng/RHS/WyTozyywPxAMMqyX/vNjzhNZv8 WzPjYL1WoeQi0MsyNPml21xxDpcQt6LDKfGWOrMI4OMb4eicPJIHUCnCQ1BgHQN1EN nRYGqE9gaZhLvN5PVyGIGfXzQAipgENGpjkvH64M= Received: from gander.ecs.soton.ac.uk (gander.ecs.soton.ac.uk [2001:630:d0:f102::25d]) by falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk (falcon.ecs.soton.ac.uk [2001:630:d0:f102::25e]) envelope-from with ESMTP (valid=N/A) id r2BCk91194707562Gz ret-id none; Thu, 12 Mar 2015 12:46:10 +0000 Received: from tjc-macbook01.ecs.soton.ac.uk (tjc-macbook01.ecs.soton.ac.uk [152.78.65.100]) (authenticated bits=0) by gander.ecs.soton.ac.uk (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id t2CCk6rV009857 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Thu, 12 Mar 2015 12:46:06 GMT Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 8.2 \(2070.6\)) Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="Apple-Mail=_DCC8C4FD-0188-4480-A22D-6A724F4B85A3"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha512 X-Pgp-Agent: GPGMail 2.5b5 From: Tim Chown In-Reply-To: Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 12:46:06 +0000 Message-ID: References: <1CE5A7D5-3CB4-4991-86CE-94288599825F@nostrum.com> To: Arkko Jari X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.2070.6) X-ECS-MailScanner: Found to be clean, Found to be clean X-smtpf-Report: sid=r2BCk9119470756200; tid=r2BCk91194707562Gz; client=relay,ipv6; mail=; rcpt=; nrcpt=4:0; fails=0 X-ECS-MailScanner-Information: Please contact the ISP for more information X-ECS-MailScanner-ID: t2CCk916030848 X-ECS-MailScanner-From: tjc@ecs.soton.ac.uk Archived-At: Cc: Ben Campbell , draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements.all@tools.ietf.org, "gen-art@ietf.org Team \(gen-art@ietf.org\)" Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [dnssd] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 12:46:51 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_DCC8C4FD-0188-4480-A22D-6A724F4B85A3 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_6FA0D2BD-A11F-45BB-ABC1-144B5B94B04E" --Apple-Mail=_6FA0D2BD-A11F-45BB-ABC1-144B5B94B04E Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Yep, thanks, and Stuart for proposed text. Tim > On 12 Mar 2015, at 10:04, Jari Arkko wrote: >=20 > Big thanks for your review, Ben. >=20 > Jari >=20 > On 23 Dec 2014, at 01:40, Ben Campbell wrote: >=20 >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>=20 >> . >>=20 >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >>=20 >> Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04 >> Reviewer: Ben Campbell >> Review Date: 2014-12-22 >> IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07 >> IESG Telechat date: (if known) >>=20 >> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an = informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand. >>=20 >> Major issues: >>=20 >> None >>=20 >> Minor issues: >>=20 >> The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target = audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't = really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-) >>=20 >> Nits/editorial comments: >>=20 >> -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references. >>=20 >> -- REQ2: >>=20 >> Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when = used in zero configuration mode? >>=20 >>=20 >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> Gen-art@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >=20 > _______________________________________________ > dnssd mailing list > dnssd@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd --Apple-Mail=_6FA0D2BD-A11F-45BB-ABC1-144B5B94B04E Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii Yep, thanks, and Stuart for proposed text.

Tim

On 12 Mar 2015, at 10:04, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:

Big thanks for your = review, Ben.

Jari

On 23 Dec 2014, at 01:40, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> = wrote:

I= am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>= .

Please resolve these comments along with = any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: = 2014-12-22
IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07
IESG = Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: This = draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its = well written and easy to understand.

Major = issues:

None

Minor issues:

The acronym is a = bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already = knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to = change it at this point in the process. :-)

Nits/editorial comments:

-- = IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references.

-- REQ2:

Am I correct in = assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero = configuration mode?


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