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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2016 22:11:25 +0200
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To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Cc: "Les Ginsberg \(ginsberg\)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>,
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-02
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Thanks, all.

Jari

On 08 Aug 2016, at 19:40, Christer Holmberg =
<christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

> That should work :)
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> Thanks!
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> Regards,
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> Christer
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> From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) [mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com]
> Sent: 08 August 2016 20:39
> To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; =
gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-02
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> Christer =96
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> I will place a reference in the Introduction =96 something like:
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> =93[ISO10589} defines the format of a Link State PDU (LSP) which =
includes a Remaining Lifetime field=85=94
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> Hope that will suffice.
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>    Les
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>=20
> From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Monday, August 08, 2016 10:28 AM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg); gen-art@ietf.org; =
draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-02
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> Hi,
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> >Thanx for your review.
> >
> >ISO 10589 is the base specification for IS-IS and there is a =
reference to it in the document.
> >This is where you will find details about Link State PDUs.
> >
> >I would be reluctant to include any sort of summary description of an =
LSP in this document out of fear that it might be seen as differing from =
the base protocol specification.
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> I think it would be useful to place that reference also in the =
Abstract, and in the problem statement, before you start talking about =
the LSP.
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> You don=92t have to add an LSP description, simply a reference so that =
it is easy for me to know where to get more information - without having =
to look for the reference elsewhere in the document :)
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> Regards,
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> Christer
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>=20
> From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Saturday, August 06, 2016 10:03 AM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org; =
draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-02
>=20
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on =
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at =
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
> Document:                       draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-02
> Reviewer:                         Christer Holmberg
> Review Date:                   6 August 2016
> IETF LC End Date:            15 August 2016
> IETF Telechat Date:        N/A
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> Summary:
> The document is well written, and almost ready for publication as a =
standards track RFC, but I have a couple of editorial comments that I=92d =
like the authors to address.
> Major Issues:    None
> Minor Issues:    None
> Editorial Issues:
> The Abstract says:
> =93Corruption of the Remainining Lifetime Field in a Link State PDU =
can go undetected.  In certain scenarios this may cause or exacerbate =
flooding storms.  It is also a possible denial of service attack vector. =
 This document defines a backwards compatible solution to this problem.=94=

> =85and the first sentence of the Problem Statement says:
> =93Each Link State PDU (LSP) includes a Remaining Lifetime field.=94
> I have no idea what a Link State PDU is, and there is no introduction =
to what the draft is all about. The text jumps direction into the work.
> So, please add a reference to Link State PDU (LSP), and please give a =
little bit of introduction text what context/environment this is all =
about. I assume there is some core document which describes the =
context/environment where the Link State PDU is used?
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