Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-33

alissa@cooperw.in Tue, 05 January 2021 14:21 UTC

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Date: Tue, 05 Jan 2021 09:21:24 -0500
From: alissa@cooperw.in
To: "Stewart Bryant" <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: last-call@ietf.org, "QUIC WG" <quic@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-quic-transport.all@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-33
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Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a Yes ballot.

Alissa

On Mon, Jan 4, 2021, at 9:52 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-quic-transport-33
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2021-01-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-16
> IESG Telechat date: 2021-01-07
> 
> Summary:
> This is a very clever, well written and innovative body of work, and is ready
> to be published.
> 
> Given the huge number of people that will need to be conversant with this, I
> think it would be useful if a document akin to a tutorial were published by the
> WG to help those with less specialist interest better understand the principles
> of operation. Normally such material would be included in the base text, but I
> understand the concern that this already a large document.
> 
> Major issues:
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> None
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