Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Tue, 31 July 2018 01:35 UTC

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thanks for review!

> Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation Clarifications"

ok.  how about "BGP-4 RPKI-Based Origin Validation Clarifications?"

> Abstract:  s/\"/./

whoopsie.

will keep new xml in in emacs buffer until all reviews are in

randy