[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-ospf-auth-trailer-ospfv3-09

Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Wed, 02 November 2011 05:04 UTC

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Document:  draft-ietf-ospf-auth-trailer-ospfv3-09
Reviewer:  Wassim Haddad
Review Date: November 1st, 2011
IETF LC End Date: August 08, 2011
IESG Telechat date: November 03, 2011

Summary:  This document is almsot ready to be published as a proposed standard.

Major issues: None


Minor issues: 

- The draft mentions twice "MANETs" in the "abstract" and "introduction" sections without elaborating on that nor giving any reference specific to it.  Since, MANETs has a set of routing protocols and in order to avoid confusion, some further clarification about OSPFv3 in that context would IMHO be helpful.


Regards,

Wassim H.