[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22

Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 28 March 2023 16:27 UTC

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Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-??
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2023-03-28
IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:Ready

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
a) I managed to find in this well written document one typo:

Section 6

we would like to
   sincerely apolgized for anyone who we forgot to credit

apologize
b) Lack of an example .alt TLD as indicated in the Artart LC Review. I wonder
if this is due to maybe there will be none.