[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Fri, 28 September 2018 03:56 UTC

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Reviewer: Jari Arkko
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09
Reviewer: Jari Arkko
Review Date: 2018-09-27
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

While not being a DNS, EPP, or XML expert :-) I have reviewed this document and
found it to be clear and reasonable. I have no issues. And I was happy to see
some implementations in the implementation report at the end.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: