[Gen-art] Re: Genart early review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-same-origin-02

Job Snijders <job@fastly.com> Mon, 12 August 2024 08:51 UTC

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Date: Mon, 12 Aug 2024 10:51:33 +0200
From: Job Snijders <job@fastly.com>
To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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On Fri, Aug 09, 2024 at 03:27:45PM -0700, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker wrote:
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Thank you for your review!

> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> [Page 4], section 4, "Registies"--->"Registries"

Thanks, fixed in my edit buffer: 

https://github.com/job/draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-same-origin/commit/f9da02300c4d7f6559398d2bc72269244e70f603

Kind regards,

Job