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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 29 August 2016 04:47 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-08-29
IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-08
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready with nits
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Comments:
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1. I was co-chair of the original diffserv WG, and I have tracked this draft
throughout its life and influenced some of its content. I have re-read it
carefully for this review.

2. I believe it is correctly positioned as Informational. It might become a
candidate for BCP with deployment experience.

Nits:
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Section 4 mentions RFC2575, certainly a typo for RFC2475.

Non-reference mentions of RFCs are inconsistent, e.g. both "RFC4594" and  "RFC 4594" occur.

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